Rough Cut - First 3 Scenes
Please note: the voice-over at the start of the video will not be done by me in the final cut; it will be done by the girl from the red scene.
Initital Responses to the Brief
I will say that something I decided on instantly after being given the brief was that I wanted to pursue a fictional production, and would only really consider the alternative if my brain simply could not concoct a story that when transferred to paper wouldn't immediately take a one-way trip to the nearest bin. As of now, I am unsure which fictional world I wish to dive into; the brief does not specify a genre, although the channels (neither ITV or Channel 5 are particularly famous for their dramatic achievements) and their remits arguably do somewhat limit my options. Initial contemplations have steered me in the direction a crime drama - for I find it difficult to thin k of ITV drama without the word "Broadchurch" springing to mind - but I am yet to sit down and engage with a blank sheet of paper, known enemy of creativity though it is. Upon initially reading the brief set, most of my attention went to the fact that the programme we're tasked with producing ...
This looks good so far. You know already that there are some improvements needed with sound. It is also a little short but I know you've got another scene to add. Your first shot is a little grainy because of the lighting - I wonder if this is the best shot to start with?
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