Second Draft Script

Second Draft



For this draft, I have changed the first scene, stylising it in what I think is a more interesting way, and adding some heavy contrast in both the audio and the visuals. I think that the broken pacing this version of the scene creates fits nicely into my genre, because it leaves audiences on edge due to its fragmented, uncommon nature. 



I haven't really made much progress in cutting the dialogue down in the real-world scene, so that's what I'll be working on next.

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